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热心网友 时间:2023-10-25 10:06
写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。I am a little reporter of Taiyuan evening news. Today, I and other little reporters took a car to visit the old double synthesis factory in Taiyuan, and made the Lantern Festival myself.我是一名太原晚报的小记者,今天我和其他小记者坐车来到了太原市的老字号———双合成工厂参观,并亲手制作了元宵。When we enter the factory, the first thing we see is the machine for making steamed stuffed buns. Put the steamed stuffed bun skin on the machine for making steamed stuffed buns, and it will automatically make steamed stuffed buns. Its very interesting!我们进入工厂,首先看到的是制作包子的机器,把包子皮放到制作包子的机器上,它就自动做出包子,有趣极了!Then we finally began to make Lantern Festival. We were in groups of three. There were four pots on the table. First take one pot to receive cold water, and then take one pot to sprinkle some flour.接着我们终于开始做元宵了,我们每三个人一组,桌子上有四个盆儿,先拿一个盆儿接凉水,再拿一个盆儿洒上点儿面粉。Then put the prepared stuffing into the basin and shake it all the time. Shake it, and take out the Lantern Festival and water it once to make it more sticky.然后把事先准备好的馅儿放到盆里一直摇,摇一摇,就把元宵拿出来过一次水,让它更有粘性。Then put it back into the basin and shake it, and it will become yuanxiao. I took the prepared Lantern Festival home to my parents. They said it was delicious! I will also make Yuanxiao at home in the future.再放回盆儿里接着摇,就摇成元宵了。我把做好的元宵拿回家给爸爸妈妈吃,他们说好吃极了!以后我也要在家里做元宵。