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发布网友 发布时间：2024-10-23 23:32

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热心网友 时间：2分钟前

As we all know, the shortage of water source has become one of the most serious problems us faced today. Therefore, we should educate people to save water in their daily lives.

The picture above illustrates a model example of water economization. It shows that we can reuse water in many occasions. In the first place we can use clear water to wash rice and then use rice-washed water to wash vegetables so that we can not only reuse water but also make the vegetables more clear and safe. This is because, there are some components in the rice-washed water can help filter the chemical poisons left on the vegetables. After that, though the water would not be that clear, it can be used to mop the floor.

Now, most of us use clean water to flush toilet which is a huge waste of water. As the picture shows that we can use the dirty water flush instead.

As a conclusion, in my opinion the best way to save water is to make everyone aware that how to save water in their daily lives. "Many a little makes a mickle", if everyone realises the importance of water economization and acts a good example for their children it will bring a great benefit the families as well as to the whole country. Besides, this is also critical for the further generations.

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热心网友 时间：2分钟前

As everyone knows that water shortage has become one of the most serious problems facing us today .So that we should educate people to raise their sense of water conservation.
It is a model example of water conservation in the above picture. It shows that we can reuse water in our daily life. In the first place we can use clear water to wash rice and then use rice-washed water to wash vegetables .So that we can not only reuse water but also make the vegetables more clearly and safely. Because there is some matter in the rice-washed water can put off the farm chemical which on the vegetables. Although the water is not clearly at all, it can wash the mop and shore up the floor .It is a large portion of people use the clean water to flush toilet that awaited of water seriously . As the picture shows that we can use the dirty water flush toilet.
The best way to save water, in my opinion, is to let everyone to save water in everyday. Many a little makes a mickle. If everyone have the sense of water conservation and take a good example for their children I believe it not just a benefit for a family for a country ,it is a benefit for the whole world and foe further descendents.